Wednesday, April 20, 2016

13 Admirable Heroines from Fiction

This list was originally supposed to be ten, but I couldn't possibly narrow it down after these thirteen women. 

13. Kari Baxter
Kari Baxter is a woman who perseveres through hard times, and she's loyal to her commitments.  When her husband's affair comes to light, she fights for their marriage despite everyone's oposing opinions.
12. Savvy Smith

Savannah encourages complete strangers as part of her daily life, sacrificing for them as well.  She is kind, and has a learning heart that dreams big, letting nothing get in her way.
11. Isi

Isi grows a lot through the four books she appears in.  She starts out as a soft spoken, kind, but dependent girl, and grows to be a wise independent young woman who leads a kingdom and mothers a child.
10. May Flower Dawn

Dawn is a kind young woman, with a heart for people.  Despite her family's tension she manages to root a deep bond with all of her family members.  Then she sacrifices her last moments for her family, to bring them back together, and bring her child into the world.
9. Birdie

Birdie is a strong young girl, with an independent spirit, holding the burden of a powerful song.  She has an open heart to learn in order to do the role she's been given. 
8. Leta

Leta has a brilliant mind which enables her to rise above the men- which is thought to be wrong for a woman. She is independent, and fights against the creatures which terrorize her country, while she waits for her only supporters to return.
7. Clara Oswald
Clara Oswald is an independent woman who takes crap from no one.  She is passionate, smart, and cares deeply for the people she's close to.  She may be reckless, but she learns from her mistakes.  And if you're her friend, she will protect you fiercely, to the greatest of her ability.
6. Annabeth Chase

Annabeth is a smart girl, who knows how to take of herself.  She is independent, spirited, and despite the stereotype of smart weak girl, she can hold her own ground in a battle.  
5. Miri

Miri is a young girl in the beginning of the series, and in three books she changes from an ignorant mountain girl, to a strong brilliant young woman, who saves a country from two wars, brings peace among the citizens, and saves the king, princess', and prince.
4. Hermione Granger
Hermione Granger is a strong independent girl, who is brilliant.  She's loyal to her friends, and fights for a cause to the end.  She is a good role model, in that she is clearly not a perfect girl, but takes it in stride, learning from her mistakes, and expanding her mind.
3.Vicki Byrne
Vicki is a strong girl who is not easily swayed.  She grows as a teen during the seven year tribulation, and helps spread God's message despite the heavy persecution.  She is passionate about the word of God, not afaid of what would happen to her if she were ever caught.

2. Ela Roeh
Ela is a strong girl following the Infinite's way.  She is passionate, independent, and won't let others- but the Infinite- control her life.  Despite being persecuted, and going through physical trials through the series, she never backs down from her faith, trusting in the Infinite always.
1. Starflower


Starflower is a soft spoken, strong girl, but kind to even her enemies.  She has defied every definition that is put on her as a girl.  She's so complex and contradicting to herself in a beautiful way, that I'm not sure how to describe her.  So, I will leave it, saying, that through the book, she rises into a legend, lasting hundreds of years, and inspiring people through her story.

Who are your favorite heroines from literature?

Sunday, April 17, 2016

A Books First Impression

  (I am so sorry there have been no posts lately, I will get back into a routine this week- no need to be disappointed anymore) 
Don’t judge a book by it’s cover.
  It’s a pretty popular phrase, said in tv shows, books, and by people alike.  And I know that it actually means, don’t judge someone by the way they look, but I’ve never taken it that way.  I’ve taken it in the literal sense of actually judging a book by it’s cover.  That’s why I find the phrase silly.  Everyone is always telling everyone to not judge a book by it’s cover, yet every single person does.  And don’t lie, the first impression you get of a book is the cover- it’s the same way that in the first thirty seconds of a job interview could make it or break it.  But sometimes you can’t trust the cover of a book.  And I know what you’re thinking in the sarcastic bit of your brain, No, Emma!  Really!?  I had no idea!  What an inconceivable (I just watched The Princess Bride last night) thought!  I find it interesting that some of my favorite books have horrible covers, and I never would have read them had I not been bored; or how some books I wish I had never touched, have beautiful covers.  
  It’s intrigued me enough, that I’ve made a list of five books I judged the cover of, and did not like at all, and a second list of books I judged the book of- decided I didn’t want to read it- but eventually had to for some reason or another.  
Books I judged (positively) and hated:
5. Unenchanted
No one can deny that this is a beautiful cover, and I was quite intrigued when I first saw it. Sadly, the book is not as good as I first believed it to be. It wasn't a terrible book, and I can see a certain group of people liking it, it just wasn't for me. Their was too much romance (not inappropriate romance, just romance) for me (and the guys were both the dark, handsome, mysterious stereotypes). It also did NOT intrigue me that this was a series, I didn't really want to get into a series in the period of life I was in when I read this, so I didn't enjoy it when it left at a cliffhanger.



4. Lunatic
I feel like I'm giving this book less than it deserves, so I might read it again to see what I think, but from what I remember, I hated this book. Yes, I was only ten years old when I read it, so I didn't understand the allegorical parallel that went along with the story, but I still didn't enjoy it. Once again, one of the reasons is because it had a romance in it, but I actually liked the couple in the story, which is I why I found it so upsetting, when the boy spent the entire book googling over another (evil) girl! I also have a complaint, that NOTHING seemed to happen in this book. Four years later, all I remember is this boy walking around, being tranced by this girl, while his fiance stood right beside him. Anyways, it was a huge disappointment to my ten year old mind, especially after reading three amazing books before this one.
3. Storm of Lightning
I have been reading the Michael Vey series since I was ten years old, and when I started it, I LOVED the series! As I grew older though, and my readership broadened the series grew a bit dull, but I still read it out of loyal readership. The first three aren't terrible, then I read the fourth book, and I could clearly see it was only a filler book. So, with a sigh, I waited a year for a better book to come out. And then this beauty of a cover showed up, and I was ecstatic! My anticipation grew, and I wondered if this would bring the series back as- at least- a likeable series. The release day came around, and I was so excited! I got the book, I read it... And I'm so glad it wasn't my money I spent. I've only got to leave off with one thing: I thought the fourth book was a filler, but compared to this it was as action packed as The Hunger Games series. That's how bad it was- I'm really tempted to quit the series, but alas! The loyalty to my beloved books stretch further than my detest to this villain!

4. Princess Ben
First comment on this, is that the girl's name is not Ben, it's Benevolence.
When I first began this book, I was actually thoroughly enjoying it, but about a fourth into it, it completely unraveled. Every single aspect of the book I loved was stripped away, and every single aspect of a book I hate entered the story. Then to add to this crime, the ending was horrid, and had no explanation behind it, and, it didn't even end bringing back everything I had loved in the first place. The character simply said, that it was immature and wasteful.




5. Nobody's Princess
The cover of this book is gorgeous, and the title is gorgeous! Just the cover and title foreshadow so much of this story. A kick butt heroin who fought to not be a proper princess- something I loved as a twelve year old, and still do. But let me say, none of it was true. I was extremely disappointed by this book and the main character. Helen actually doesn't mind being a princess- despite what the blurb says- and rubs it into her sister's face that she will be queen someday. This girl is supposed to come off as strong, independent, and courageous, but when it comes time for her big moment!... She sits back and watches as a different warrior girl takes her moment. I cannot stress enough how much I hate this book. It is my least favorite in all time. And as proof: I have never not completed a series- unless it's inappropriate- and there's a sequel after this book. I didn't read the sequel, that's how much I hated this book!

Books I judged (negatively) and loved:
5. The Lightning Thief-
Don't ask me why I didn't like this cover, but for some reason I didn't. And because of this cover, I didn't read it for a year or two, but last summer, I finally broke, and I read it. And there is no need to say that I fell in love when I read it- after that I fell in love with the cover.







4. Enna Burning
   I honestly hate this cover because it's just so.... Well, just look at it.  Despite my hate of the cover though, it was the second book in a series, from the point of view of a character I loved, resulting in having to read it.  And it has become my favorite book in the series.  Of course judging this cover is just not fair, because it has a new gorgeous cover, and that's the edition I actually read: Enna Burning cover.
3. Forest Born
   This is the fourth book in the same series of Enna Burning, and it's my second favorite book.  Once again, I do not enjoy the cover, but the story is beautiful.  The main character is very relatable, and I devoured this book in a day.  But it's unfair to judge this cover again, because it has a new one: Forest Born cover.
2. River Secrets
   (I've just got to say, I love this series, hate these covers- it's called the Books of Bayern) This is the third book in the series, and I don't think I need to explain why I decided to read this, because it was for the same reasons as the others.  It was part of a series, I loved the books, the characters, so I did.  And again, it has a new, more beautiful cover: River Secrets cover.
1. The Goose Girl
   This is the first book of the series, and so now, I actually had a reason for starting this book.  And trust me, I didn't really like the cover, but my friend had been recommending the book to me for a couple months.  Finally, I came to a gap, where I didn't have any books to read, so I got it, and thoroughly enjoyed it.  I'm so glad I discovered this series and author.  But this book has a cover I like more also: The Goose Girl cover

Tuesday, March 29, 2016

Beautiful People: Darrilynn Barker

This week I'm going to be participating in the Beautiful People blog meme from over at Further up and Further in.  I'll be answering questions about one of my "beautiful people-" aka, one of my characters.  I've chosen to answer the questions for Darrilynn Barker this week.  She's one of the two main characters in Dawns Rise.  Now, I know I've been taking a break from that story, but I've been craving to write some Dawns Rise lately, and I'm hoping this will satisfy me.  So, without further ado, here is Darrilynn Barker.

  1. What first inspired this character?
  Well, I first created Darrilynn’s character around the new year of 2013.  I originally based her off myself, however it was a very poor copy- you would think I’d know myself a little bit better.  But after three years of changing, and being rewritten, Darrilynn now has no trace of me whatsoever.  
Is there a person/actor you based them off?
  Well, if you see my top answer, you’ll find out.  

  1. Describe their daily routine.
Darrilynn’s routine consists of waking up around nine o’clock- she’s homeschooled, so her mom let’s her sleep in.  Darrilynn will then go downstairs, have some breakfast, then get school done while her mom is at work.  Then she will practice either archery or sword fighting for hours, until sweat soaks her body.  When her mom has gotten home, Darrilynn would have done a variety of these, as long as it consists of moving the entire time.  
  She and her mom then usually practice martial arts together- Darrilynn is taught by her mom.  After a long while of sweating and gaining bruises, she and her mom eat dinner.  A little while later, she will go to her room, then fall asleep early.  She enjoys her sleep.
  1. If they joined your local high school, what clique would they fit into?
  Well, that question is kind of difficult to answer, because I’m homeschooled.  So, I’ll just have to leave this one unanswered.


  1. Write a list of things they merely tolerate. Ex: certain people, foods, circumstances in their lives...
1. Being still
2. Fear
3. Her mom’s cooking
4. Tears
5. Religion
6. Reading

  1. How do they react in awkward silences?
  Well, knowing Darrilynn, she probably stayed quiet during the conversation, and wanted to leave anyways, so the awkward silence would just give her an excuse to leave.
  1. Can they swim? If so, how did they learn?
  Nope.  Darrilynn cannot and does not like to swim.  She has hardly even stepped inside a public swimming area.  She has never swam, and doesn’t even like to touch water- cold water, specifically.
  1. What is one major event that helped shape who they are?
   One day when Darrilynn was twelve years old, she and her mom were hanging out in a hotel room (her family use to do nothing but travel, so they spent a lot of time in hotels), when there was a knock on their door.  Her mom opened it to see an officer.  Without a word, her mom stepped outside of the room, and shut the door.  Darrilynn tried to listen to the conversation, but she didn’t hear anything besides her mom sobbing.  
  A few minutes later, her mom walked into the room- with tear filled eyes- and told Darrilynn that her dad had been murdered.
  1. What things do they value most in life?
  Darrilynn values loyalty, and family above all else.  She will do anything to keep her family- being her mom- close by.  Anyone that gets in her way, if her mom is in danger, will be torn down.
 
  1. Do they believe in giving other people second chances?
  No.  Darrilynn would never give anyone who betrayed her a second chance.
Do they have any trust issues?
  I don’t think she has any trust issues because of some major thing which happened to her, but she does tend to hold in secrets more often than tell them.
  1. Your character is having a rough day...what things do they do to
make them happy again?
  Well, Darrilynn isn’t really ever “happy.”  She’s not grumpy, but she’s not a necessarily happy person.  But if she’s upset, that probably means she’s on the verge of tears- which would make her just angry.  Darrilynn would probably go practice sword fighting until she’s forgotten her problems, and is in the instinctive rhythm of hitting the dummy with her sword.
Is there anyone they talk/interact with to get in a better mood?
  The only person Darrilynn would ever consider would be her mom.  But even then, she wouldn’t want to bug her.  So, it’s a very unlikely option that Darrilynn would talk to her mom to get into a better mood.


Wednesday, March 23, 2016

I'm a Christian... and I write about dark things

  I’m aware that a lot of people aren’t going to agree with my post- I’ve already met people who disagree.  But please bear with me.
  Harry Potter, Lord of the Rings, Hunger Games, and the Door Within trilogy- I read and have watched all of these at some point in my life, and *gasp* I enjoyed them!  I found valuable lessons in all of them!  Surprising right!?  
  I draw inspiration for my stories from what I read- so yes, you could call what I write “dark.”  It has magic, and gruesome creatures, death, and broken characters (actually, I haven’t quite reached that emotional trauma of broken characters yet, but I’m learning).  
  I can imagine people reading this and being confused on why I would find such things good or enjoyable.  
  Before I explain anything, here is the definition of “dark.”  With little or no light.  There.  Are you satisfied?  Well, I’m not.  I’m a word freak, bear with me as I display the definition of the polar opposite: light.  Having a considerable or sufficient amount of natural light.  Since we’re talking of dark in a spiritual sense, it’s only fair to speak of light in the same terms.  Natural light, therefore, can only have one true definition and symbol, which would be Jesus Christ.  Darkness is obviously our hearts- the hearts of man.  It drags all the way back to the Garden of Eden, where Adam and Eve sinned, and were separated from God.  Their hearts turned black, and dark- no light could be let in, and there could be no darkness in light.  
  So, there is the establishment of “dark” for the moment.  “Dark” is not the common belief of heavy subjects such as murder, magic, and battles.  “Darkness,” by definition, is the complete lack of light- no good in it, whatsoever.  
  Now, another common belief among Christians (at least from what I have witnessed), is that every secular book is completely dark, they have no light in them at all.  Which brings me back the two series I mentioned earlier- The Hunger Games, and Harry Potter.  These two popular series are always up for debate, whether they have dark themes, light themes, or if maybe they are just hollow with no deeper meaning to them.  From the definitions we set up earlier, neither of these books are dark.  That being said, they are not Christian books, and therefore have no natural light to them.  That doesn’t mean however that they are completely lost in beautiful biblical themes though.  That’s right.  I just said Harry Potter and The Hunger Games has biblical themes.  I can imagine some of you being completely revolted by now.
  In order to explain this belief though, I need to explain another concept- be back in a moment (sorry for jumping around so much).  
  Step back from the cute little bible stories you know, and the hopeful story layering beneath it, and look at the bible as simply a book and a story.  The bible is probably the “darkest (by common definition)” book in the universe- if you look at it as just a story, not something to believe in.  The reason it is such a light filled book, is obviously because of Christ.  Jesus Christ, God, the crucifixion, and the rising is what makes it a book that makes us find peace and hope in it- and the fact that it’s true makes it so much sweeter.  But my point is, we are all dark, but Jesus’ redemption, and hope- His light- floods out the darkness once we’ve accepted it.  
  The darkness and the light is always in battle inside of us, therefore we relate to characters who are always in the darkness, who are being seeked by redemption, but runs from it instead.  I don’t think many people are going to like me at this moment, but I am saying that a lot (not all) of books in the Christian market display perfect people who never battle with evil, they always know exactly what to do, and do it with ease.  The only problem is now to get past the horrible bad guys who don’t believe in God- preaching to them along the way also.  Yeah, that’s a good book, I guess.  People look at it longingly, and think, I wish I didn’t have problems, like them.  No, this isn’t relatable.  
  Characters who battle with the darkness, who have suicidal thoughts, going through depression, angry at God since they were little children.  This is what we can relate to, not the other stuff.
  We want stories of characters battling the darkness in them, then coming out in faith of hope and redemption.  
Whatever I tell you in the dark, speak in the light; and what you hear in the ear, preach on the housetops.  Matthew 10:27
  This is where I mention The Hunger Games and Harry Potter once again.  The Hunger Games series is about a girl dealing and battling with her beliefs of self sacrifice, death, life, and murder.  And coming out in the end, still battling with these things- and the traumatic experiences she has witnessed- but now seeking out love, hope, and peace.  
  Harry Potter is a story of an abused boy, hopeless, and sure he’s worthless.  Then he is told he’s so much more than that.  But he still deals with his past insecurities, piled on with new ones.  He deals with hopelessness, self sacrifice, doubts of importance, death, love, friendship, overwhelming burdens, and bravery.  And in the end, he still faces those things, but with hope, and bravery- with loads of other qualities learned and still battled- he can make the right decision.  
  Those battles and endings, we can all relate too, we can’t relate to the typical Christian characters and stories- I’m sorry.  
  "I write entirely to find out what I'm thinking, what I'm looking at, what I see and what it means. What I want and what I fear." -Joan Didion
 When you pick up a book, you pick up part of an author’s soul.  They spent hours preparing this book for your enjoyment, and cried tears over the hard work.  But they never just write it for the reader.  They write to discover.  As I write, I discover bits and pieces of my soul and my beliefs.  My battles are battled in my story.  I don’t know anything until I write it down.  My hands reveal words of my mind, and battles of my heart I didn’t know about before.  
  So, yes.  I am a Christian, and I am a writer who writes about “dark” things, but in order to examine my mind, and help others to examine their’s.

“For real love brings pain. Real love means sacrifices and hurts and all the thousand shocks of life. But it also means beauty, true beauty.” -Moonblood

Wednesday, March 16, 2016

Baker Street

  Addy and Thacia have entered a new realm! Eliana and I are very excited about this world, and have several ideas for it. We would also like to apologize for how badly written the stories on the Percy Jackson world were. We promise we're going to do better with this new realm, and the ones to come. So, this next story, I have written, and it is set in the fantastic world of BBC's Sherlock. Enjoy!

Thacia and Addy stared down Baker street, watching as a man strolled quietly into an apartment.  Being the adventurers and stalkers they were, they followed closely behind, into the apartment building.  They creaked up the stairs behind him.  Something nagged at the back of Thacia’s mind, something just sudden, that made her stop in her tracks, but she ignored it, and walked on.  As she and Addy reached the top of the stairs, they heard the conversation between the man they had followed, and another man, who they both quickly recognized.  Sherlock.  A broad demented smile stretched across Thacia’s face.  She wanted to laugh for joy and victory, but then, of course, that would give the two of them away.  So she kept her mouth shut.  
  Thacia listened closely, reminding herself she was listening to a possibly historic conversation.  A conversation between the genius mind of Sherlock Holmes, and the infamous, demented Moriarty.  Who both Thacia and Addy stalked.  “Every fairytale needs a good old fashioned villain,” Moriarty said.
  Thacia’s smile broadened, and her eyes got wide at the genius words.  Addy turned around to Thacia, and was also smiling at the genius and truth in those words.  Moriarty was still talking, “You’re on the side of the angels,” he said disappointedly, then pausing.
  Now Sherlock, completely ignored Moriarty, said instead, “Got the jury, of course.”
  “I got into the Tower of London, you don’t think I can’t worm my way into twelve hotel rooms?”  Moriarty replied.
  “Cable network,” Sherlock replied, obviously just coming to this conclusion.
  Bloody brilliant!  Thacia thought.  Not that she’d ever do it- well, maybe- but just bloody brilliant!  “Every person has their pressure point,” Moriarty continued, "Someone they want to keep from harm.  Easy peasy.”
  “So how are you going to do it?”  Sherlock asked, changing the subject again, “Burn me.”  You could hear the mockery in his voice.
  “Oh, that’s the problem.  The final problem.  Have you worked out what it is yet?  What’s the final problem?  I did tell you, but did you listen?”  he sang the last part, and then there was a pause.  “How hard do you find it?  Having to say I don’t know.”
  Addy, in front of Thacia, turned around to Thacia, and whispered, “They change subjects a lot.”
  “I know!”  Thacia mouthed, completely insane as always.
  Thacia watched as Addy crossed her eyes, then turned back to the conversation, where Moriarty was laughing and calling Sherlock clever.  “Have you told your little friends yet?”  he then asked.
  “Told them what?”  Sherlock asked.
  “Why I broke into all those places and never took anything.”
  “No,” Sherlock answered- the least amount of words Thacia had ever heard come out of him.  She gaped dramatically, but quietly, and to herself.  
  “But you understand?”  
  “Obviously." This time, Addy turned to Thacia, and gaped at her, and Thacia almost laughed.
  Moriarty had said something in that moment, then Sherlock replied, “You want me to tell you what you already know?”
  “No, I want you to prove you know it,” Moriarty answered.
  “You didn’t take anything . . . because you don’t need to.”
  “Good.”
  “You’ll never need to take anything ever again.”
  “Very good . . . Because?”  Moriarty prodded Sherlock for answers.
  “Because nothing- nothing- in the bank of England or the tower of London, or the Pentonville prison, could possibly match the value of the key that could get you into all three.”
  “I could open any door, anywhere, with a few tiny lines of computer code.  There’s no such thing as a private bank account now.  They’re all mine.  There’s no such thing as secrecy, I own secrecy.  Nuclear codes, I could blow up nations in alphabetical order.  In a world of locked rooms, the man with the key is king- and honey, you should see me in a crown,” Moriarty sang the last sentence as a drawn out line.
  Thacia whispered into Addy’s ear, “What is with him and singing?”  
  Addy turned and faced Thacia, and mouthed, “I know!”
  Then they both turned back to the conversation, where Sherlock was talking again, “You could break into any bank, but you care about the highest bidder?”
  “I don’t.  I just like to watch them all competing.  Daddy, loves me the best.  Aren’t ordinary people adorable?  Well you know, you’ve got John.  I should get myself a live in one.”
  “Why are you doing all this?”  Sherlock suddenly asked, clearly at a lost.  Gosh, Sherlock.  Don’t you know anything?
  “Must be so funny,” Moriarty spoke over Sherlock.  From the way he obliviously said it, he seemed to still be on the subject of ordinary people.  
  “You don’t want money, or power, not really.  What is it all for?”  Sherlock asked, again, still contemplating.
  Thacia wanted to laugh in Sherlock’s face.  Moriarty answered, “I want to solve the problem.  Our problem.  The final problem.  It’s gonna start very soon, Sherlock.  The fall… But don’t be scared.  Falling’s just like flying, except there’s a more permanent destination.”
  Thacia heard one of them stand, and the other followed.  “I never liked riddles,” Sherlock said.
  “Learn to,” Moriarty responded.  “Because I owe you a fall, Sherlock.  I...O...U…”
  Then Thacia and Addy heard Moriarty begin to leave the room, and they quickly hid.  Moriarty strolled passed them, as both Thacia and Addy tried to keep from laughing along with their insanity.  After the door shut downstairs, Sherlock spoke from inside his flat, while playing the violin, “You two can come out now.”
  Dying of laughter, they barreled into the room.  “Stop your bumbling, and tell me what you’re doing here,” Sherlock stated, clearly annoyed.
  He practically threw down his violin, tossing it off his shoulder.  After Thacia and Addy got a grip on their laughter, they calmed… and then laughed again.  Thacia could see Sherlock standing in front of them, completely perturbed, and waiting for an explanation.  Addy was first to recover, so she answered through her breaths, as Thacia continued to laugh her head off.  “Oh, gosh.  You two are mad,” Sherlock complained, as Addy began talking.
  “Well, we saw Moriarty strolling along the street, and Thacia said, ‘Hey, isn’t he supposed to be in jail?’  And then I said, ‘Well actually, the jury said he wasn’t guilty, and let him go, and blah, blah, blah.’  And so, we continued discussing this, and finally we realized we were following him, so we just said, ‘Hey-”
  “Oh, stop rambling,” Sherlock interrupted as he turned away, staring out the window.
  Thacia had finally caught her breath, and she objected to his statement, “We’ll ramble if we want to ramble!”
  “Anyways, why are you here?”  Sherlock asked.
  “Because-” Thacia to answer, but something stopped her in her mind.
She stayed silent, trying to figure it out.  But Addy jumped in for her, answering.  Although, Thacia thought her voice sounded unsure of itself too.  “We came for an adventure, because we got bored, and were sick and tired.”
  Sherlock barely glanced behind him, hardly catching a glimpse of Thacia and Addy.  “You’re not sick,” he sniffed the air, “And you smell of the sea.”
  “Well, you smell of the sea!”  Thacia argued.
  “Oh, don’t speak, Thacia.  You lower the IQ on the entire street,” Sherlock said, still staring out the window.
  “Hey!”  Addy shouted, suddenly perturbed, “You got that from me!  I said that to you!”  Addy turned to Thacia, and started talking, “Thacia, he stole that from me.  Can you believe he stole that from me?”
  Sherlock grabbed them by their coats, “Alright, come on.  You can ramble outside.”
  Sherlock pulled Thacia and Addy downstairs, as they yelled at him for taking Addy’s line.  “You’re just jealous, because you haven’t come up with any genius lines,” Addy said, “Only my brother and I can come up with them.”
  Sherlock walked them down the stairs outside, let go, and walked back in, shutting the door.  “I can’t believe he stole your line!” Thacia said, stomping her foot.
  “I know,” Addy responded.
  “It makes me so…” she paused, then smiled, “Perturbed.”
  Addy stared at her weirdly, “Since when do you use the word, perturbed?”
  Thacia shrugged, “It’s my new favorite word.”
  Then they both started laughing.  “He doesn’t even know!”  Thacia shouted, laughing.
  “And never will,” Addy replied.

  Then they walked down Baker Street, laughing like maniacs.